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a lie is your creation
Contributed by
crysizere
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Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 05:05:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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listen to her speak
useless words flow from her lips
forever lies
at her soul they rip
unbareable anger
suppresed in her
she never realized
and now she wants an answer
Why did this happen?
when and how?
It's because of you
so she must pretend now
unaccepted in truth
how would they react?
she would be shuned
I dont think you realize your impact
you made her pretend
now she's a lie
She hopes you're happy
but she will no longer try
Giving up hope
shes tried to keep it alive
its impossible now
and its time for her to arrive
You won't like the outcome
it's against your demands
but she wants you to know
she's taking herself in her own hands
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2006-03-25 17:05:25]
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Re: a lie is your creation
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 05:50:35 PM AEST
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wow, really good, especially considering it was written on the spot. great write.
~natalya
PS: why exactly was it placed under "family poetry"....? just wondering.
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Re: a lie is your creation
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by slogan on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:35:46 PM AEST
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| great write...jh |
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