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Into pill's grave...
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 04:09:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This page of raging history
is my list of pains and more
nothing more is every
stain that blackens door
my room is winter shaded
look back to no reflection
just a fire that's faded
drugs are no protection
yes i'm shaking leaves drop
my eyes can't focus more
shivering need i can't stop
twitching till the morn'
this deep lake is my sleep
weep deeper than the well
addiction's hill is steep
pillows of pills in hell
i'm falling into wind
the ground will swallow me
trees are evil grinned
their roots will follow me...
Into the grave...
...that drugs made.
dw
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Re: Into pill's grave...
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 05:30:57 PM AEST
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wow, dark, painful, great write i loved it.
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Re: Into pill's grave...
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by Alina on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 06:59:07 PM AEST
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I can understand how you feel, all addicts, at least those that can realize what they are feel this way, in some form or another
ALINA |
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Re: Into pill's grave...
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by TheKid on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 09:39:09 PM AEST
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| ENJOYED this one a lot! Excellent write |
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Re: Into pill's grave...
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by slogan on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:46:53 PM AEST
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| great piece of work..jh |
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Re: Into pill's grave...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 08:44:33 PM AEST
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~*Dwayne*~
The heartaches and outcome results from an addict/user. Drugs is a no go. I wished I could make all the illegal drugs just vanish. The world would be such a safer place to be in. As always you can produce a deep and thought provoking write my dear friend.
i'm falling into wind
the ground will swallow me
trees are evil grinned
their roots will follow me...
Into the grave...
...that drugs made.
Unfortunately for some. This will be their fate.
Thanks for sharing ur write with us ~*DW*~
Always a pleasure to venture forth ur pages.
*warm hugs*
~*suzie Q*~ |
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