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Inventory
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 03:49:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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5 people,
1 apartment,
2 rooms-
And a closet.
2 phones,
4 coffee makers,
2 cars-
And no gas
4 cans of spray paint,
9 street signs,
1 gas mask-
And 5 delinquents
1 computer,
2875 songs,
2 printers-
And no ink,
14 empty bowls,
1 grinder,
7 pills of E?
1000’s of lost brain cells
12 empty packs,
16 ash trays
2/3 of a cigarette-
0 lighters.
28 packs of Ramen,
No bread,
8 pounds ketchup-
And 26 empty liquor bottles,
39 dirty cups,
3 huge bags of trash,
5 bottle of febreze-
Only me left to clean
Copyright ©
hardcoreputa
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2006-03-25 15:49:18]
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Re: Inventory
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 04:06:31 PM AEST
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oh wow, i've never seen a write like that, loved it though. you've got my sympathy , that's some life, keep writing, i look forward to reading more.
~natalya
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Re: Inventory
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by DarkFaerie on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 04:16:11 PM AEST
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| Great write, lets us see right into your life. I love honestly. : ) |
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Re: Inventory
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 04:30:58 PM AEST
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| hey your in my house!!! j/k great write i had a place JUST like this not too many years ago! very creative well done! |
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Re: Inventory
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 06:21:39 PM AEST
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| this was unusual. liked it. chris |
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Re: Inventory
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by slogan on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:48:23 PM AEST
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| wow... you really counted all that stuff...great job..jh |
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Re: Inventory
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by Alison on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 06:44:09 PM AEST
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| i really liked the honesty in this. great write |
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