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Roses sent
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 02:28:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Roses will come your way
brightly colored red
Love behind the eyes they hold
your image in their heart etched in shades of gold
There is a story told
behind each rose that he holds
each one he gives a story unfolds
he holds her dear
his love is true
his eternal love for her shines through his soul
JENNI
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PhantomVampyress
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2006-03-25 14:28:32]
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Re: Roses sent
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 02:47:07 PM AEST
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nice written, beautiful imagery.
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Re: Roses sent
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by inoc on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 03:09:26 PM AEST
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the wording is petty good...
[don't they say
2 heads are better than one]
coni
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Re: Roses sent
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by shelby on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 08:42:44 PM AEST
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lovely write you two did a great job.
Michelle |
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Re: Roses sent
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 09:54:19 PM AEST
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beautiful
Shari |
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Re: Roses sent
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by slogan on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:52:43 PM AEST
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| great write..jh |
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Re: Roses sent
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by emystar on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 02:06:37 AM AEST
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Very good write Jen. U-n-your mom should write together more awesome. I give u both five big ole stars.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Roses sent
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by Abhisek on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 03:49:01 AM AEST
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| U r good! |
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Re: Roses sent
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 12:19:51 AM AEST
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*smiles*
I love it Jennittude! ! ! Your Mom & you did well.
Thank you for a very nice and enjoyable read.
Tim
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Re: Roses sent
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 11:04:38 PM AEST
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Poetry runs in the family!
Mom should set up a YPDC account.
Beautiful work from the pair of you.
J. |
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Re: Roses sent
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by MyNameIsJonas on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:36:00 AM AEST
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Aw deng
I wish my mom was a writer
Or at least remotly intersted in poetry. |
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Re: Roses sent
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 10:27:37 AM AEST
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This was very good.. I liked this poem...
Take care
Christina |
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