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Broken and Bruised

Contributed by DarkFaerie on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 12:14:30 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Lost and confused
Not sure what I should do
Should I follow my heart
Which screams you from the start

Should I follow my head
To the one sleeping in bed
I dont know what to do
I wish I was see-through

My heart flutters on a string
The pain is always churning
I need to decide
But it feels like a part of me died

So I sit here lost and confused
My soul broken and bruised
Not sure where to turn
And yet my heart still yearns




Copyright © DarkFaerie ... [ 2006-03-25 12:14:30]
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Re: Broken and Bruised (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 12:39:59 PM AEST
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Nice flow..great write...jh


Re: Broken and Bruised (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 02:10:17 PM AEST
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some decesions in life are so hard to make. i hope you find the strength to find your path. great write packed with emotions A++++

nice flow to this!


Re: Broken and Bruised (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 02:29:38 PM AEST
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wow this is a very expressive and powerful write on confusion.. I know this feeling well.. great job at putting it into words

JENNI


Re: Broken and Bruised (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 03:57:22 PM AEST
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it seems like you have a tough decision to make. i hope the best for the two of you. in my experience any relationship that is easy is a relationship where the people don't care about eachother best luck


Re: Broken and Bruised (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 05:25:22 PM AEST
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Oh 2 be this honest in one writting, how does any one do it and with such conviction. How good it must feel. a beautiful peice of writting dispiteall the turmoil.

Ben




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