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Black Widow
Contributed by
dedpoet
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Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 02:46:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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She sits alone and gently rocks
wipes the blood from her mouth
hates herself, loves him
pulls his heart out
cries a tear
takes a bite
chokes a sob
turns out the light
leaves what she didn't finish
she'll come back
vomits herself almost to death
the widow turning black
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Re: Black Widow
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 02:15:42 PM AEST (User
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hmm this has a nice dark feel to it. good word usage very descriptive i like it! A+++
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