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Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
Contributed by
drtylilsecret
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Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 11:36:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fulfilling secret wishes,
Private, guarded thoughts,
Deepest lust desires,
Are all unlocked,
At the swift of his lips,
At the touch of his fires
Something deep inside is stirred,
Catching, gasping breaths,
A shudder, deep moan,
Passionate kiss,
Sensual carresses,
Entered a forbidden zone.
Fingers' trace upon
The oh-so fragile skin,
Remnants of a burning sensation.
Hidden carnal wants escape,
So wrong.. but oh so right..
Surrender to temptation
Breathless exhaust,
Arousing moves,
Satisfy the fleshly crave,
Pressed against a wall,
Cries of ecstasy,
Tranformed now into his slave.
Weakness begging
To be conquered,
Easily lured, so unaware,
Enticed by sultry visions,
Sold your soul right to the Devil,
When you fell into his lair.
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drtylilsecret
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 12:32:03 AM AEST
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| nice, has a very sensual feel to it. good write |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 01:40:40 PM AEST
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wow...beautifully written! i like it...strange, different, but awesome all the same.
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 09:33:24 PM AEST
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i'm glad and proud? whatever...you are one of the few to step across of the lines of the ordinary, its a different poem and i love that about it. sry i haven't commented you in a while, i'll be sure to at least read the rest of them, =). pleace out
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by summer on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 12:35:06 AM AEST
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| like it. conjures up sexy earthy images as well as a darker side good work x |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by Somnium on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 04:50:53 PM AEST
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Wow, conjures up some really dark images and emotions.
Great write
Ben |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by Caviglia on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 04:14:06 AM AEST
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Well done!
You manage to convey the passion and sensuality with a relatively simple vocab (something I cannot do).
I suppose I'd love it even more if I'd experienced such an moment! |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by Abhisek on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 03:34:26 AM AEST
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Few people can discribe lust so beautifully.
Thanks, I think one day in life we should meet and talk about it. Good job Natalya.
Abhisek. |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 01:35:14 AM AEST
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Well, what can I say I'm speechless, but daughters do grow up.
sadaddy |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 02:56:30 PM AEST
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Dirty Little Secret must be the best kept secret on YPDC, because I know little about this poet who has a great ability to write and is apparantly quite popular, LOL
Anyway this is one of the best and most descriptive poems I have ever read on the subject of lust. You have done one hell of a fine job and made a fan in just one write. I will be reading old, looking for new.
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 06:15:41 PM AEST
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That was really really hot :p
nah i thought it was a good write
your poetry is very good i've skimmed thru sum of it
I'm jealous.... :)
keep up the good work
xo
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by wizard on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 10:48:15 AM AEST
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very nice!
wiz |
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Re: Guilty Pleasures--the Devil's Trap
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 01:08:23 PM AEST
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Hidden carnal wants escape
hmmm
ohh thats so delicious. |
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