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Fatal Assault
Contributed by
TheSpaceBetween
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Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 07:42:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Look at her, so smart and perfect
You could try to break her but it's not even worth it
She won't give it up, she won't let you in
The most you will be, is with her troubled friend
For some reason tho, this appeals to you
So you follow her around and watch her every move
Then the day comes when she lets her guard down
You weasel your way in and win your crown
One weak moment, that's all it takes
Sweet victory is yours as you watch her break
She has no idea, she doesn't see it coming
You get what you want and leave her with nothing
Her flawless world and her dreams all shattered
The addiction grows, it's all that matters
Slowly she dies with each new day
Darkness all around, her mind starts to decay
All that she was and what she could be
Now just dust and a faint memory
Soon they will bury her and it's all your fault
Then you'll move on to the next... another fatal
assault.
Copyright ©
TheSpaceBetween
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2006-03-24 19:42:17]
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Re: Fatal Assault
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by sillysal on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 10:06:55 PM AEST
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This is kind of creepy because I know people like that :(!
Gets your point across well.
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Re: Fatal Assault
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 11:49:12 PM AEST
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it is sorta disturbing, but only because it seems to make so much sense. great write.
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