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To Whom It May Concern
Contributed by
MSU_freak
on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 05:36:27 PM in AEST
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To whom
that may
to concern
my grammar,
my feelings,
my posture,
and all.
To whom
that may
to understand
my pain,
my yearning,
my heart.
To whom
that may
to even care
my lonliness,
my wandering,
my forgiveness.
To whom
that may
to want
to know
My heart won't
be broken.
Copyright ©
MSU_freak
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2006-03-24 17:36:27]
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Re: To Whom It May Concern
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by MSU_freak on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 05:41:17 PM AEST
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| I am my own worst critic!!!! this is the most boring piece!!!! |
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Re: To Whom It May Concern
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by MSU_freak on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 07:14:59 PM AEST
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| No comments....!!!!! Man I knew it was bad but geez... |
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Re: To Whom It May Concern
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by Sahara on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 01:19:26 AM AEST
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lol... it wasn't boring
You expressed yourself, got your feelings out, and that's all that matters.... wasn't bad but made me a lil on the sad side :( |
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Re: To Whom It May Concern
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:47:31 PM AEST
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Seems like you are trying to conceal some deeper emotions. I liked the introduction.
"my grammar,
my feelings,
my posture,
and all."
It focuses my inquisitiveness... perhaps almost abstract? I like it.
I can relate to this piece...excluding the last line.
The outcome seems positive, the content raw with mood.
Interesting.
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