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Concurrent Ideation
Contributed by
Mangos
on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 03:11:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Half man half beast
Untouched body left incomplete
Shadow of the former being safe asleep
Leather boots
Strung tight to its roots
Under the souls on trampled hoofs
Forgiven
Forever envisioned
A future comes without invitation
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Mangos
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2006-03-24 15:11:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Concurrent Ideation
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 11:35:55 AM AEST (User
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I really liked how you wrote this poem.. It was really good.. I liked it alot..
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