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Up on the wall
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:01:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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In a state I've never known
Who knows if it's better
I just might start to smoke
Just so I can get the cancer
Maybe I will feel the same
There's no describing this
Forget the fact that I used to not be like this
A kiss will do nothing but dig me deeper
Into this engraven image of who I've become
Like it or not, I'll stay this way
Up on the wall for everyone to see
Up on the wall to receive your pity
She had it right when she said I need to leave
The last thing I'd want is to drag you down with me
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Re: Up on the wall
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by Archie on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 01:26:08 PM AEST
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| This poem has everything except hope. It is good to feel down sometimes but not to stay there. This is a good write when speaking of self reflection. Just make sure you give yourself some where to go besides down. |
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Re: Up on the wall
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 02:30:49 AM AEST
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agreeing with Archie on the merits, i wish to add that everything changes -- eventually.
good read.
thanks for sharing. |
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