|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Unmarked
Contributed by
J-E-C
on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 09:40:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
|
No need to look at me.
So open your eyes.
I don't fit in place.
It's perfect.
So what's your opinion?
I don't care if you care.
I don't care if you don't.
Everything's labeled.
But to me the bar codes are broken.
We're all just numbers right?
Well my number is zero.
Everyone is created equal.
And we're nothing we say we are.
I'm just like you.
I'm myself.
I wish you could be too.
Freedom of choice with the choice not to choose.
Conforming against conformity.
Trend of your life.
Be yourself just to be like everyone else.
So start running to stay in place.
I'll finish the race at my own pace.
For me it ended when it began.
I'm nothing just like everyone else.
I don't care.
Because everyone else does and doesn't.
I'm unmarked.
Copyright ©
J-E-C
... [
2006-03-24 09:40:53]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Unmarked
(User Rating: 1 )
by drewgreeno on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 10:01:47 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Good piece.
I like the random stream of thought - together with exploring the relationship between (un)expected phrases.
Last line ties it all together well. |
|
|
Re: Unmarked
(User Rating: 1 )
by SmileSkinDeep on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 05:44:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I agree. There are few and far between that are unmarked, I'm glad you contribute to them. And you express it very well in this poem, I really like it.
~April |
|
|
Re: Unmarked
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 08:13:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nice write. Never been one to follow another's drumbeat. Rather make my own music (so to speak). Being an individual is so much cooler. Peace, Laura |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
