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LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD AND THE BAD BAD FOX
Contributed by
lindy70
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Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 02:18:19 AM in AEST
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Little red riding hood walked through the wood.
My! oh my! she looked so good.
On her grandmama's door she gave two loud knocks,
But did not know inside was a fox.
In she went with a basket of food,
And grandmama, she was so rude.
She bared her teeth beneath the sheets,
And the smell of her breath, made her retch.
Grandmama! what bad breath you have,
Excuse me please! I need the lav.
But little red riding hood was no fool,
And came back in hiding a tool
She gave grandmama's head a big hard bang,
And out of the building she ran and ran.
Back she came with the woodchopper man,
And he shoo'd out the fox, and saved her nan.
linda walker 23.3.06
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Re: LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD AND THE BAD BAD FOX
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by AliB on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 06:26:34 AM AEST
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Very good, I liked it.
Check out my Little Red Riding Hood saga, she don't 'alf get about!!! Lmao
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Re: LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD AND THE BAD BAD FOX
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by jonquilcottage on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 07:06:05 AM AEST
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| not bad I quite liked it too - jennyx |
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Re: LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD AND THE BAD BAD FOX
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 08:49:21 AM AEST
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Excellent!! Challenge well met I'd say....
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Re: LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD AND THE BAD BAD FOX
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by brokenwings on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 02:22:21 PM AEST
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| this was cute;.. i liked it |
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Re: LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD AND THE BAD BAD FOX
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 01:25:03 PM AEST
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I prefer this red riding hood to the original lmao!!
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Re: LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD AND THE BAD BAD FOX
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:14:20 AM AEST
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| Beautifully told! |
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