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Porcelain Dreams
Contributed by
johndough111
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Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
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Beautiful, white, slick and pure
It’s cold to the bare touch of our feet, but that does not detract from its lure
Madness and chaos surrounds us, but in our porcelain dreams we may still find a cure
How can we take this decision lightly?
At first it seem like if we succeed we will look mighty
Everybody lined up dressed oh so tidy
Looking down on a wooden casket with sadness
But we forget to consider again, all the madness
And the chaos, and the stars
We forget that our dreams may only take us so far,
And that in our journey into another life
We may skip the most important part
And as we get ready to take that leap of faith, we realize just how difficult this decision is to make
Since if we step forward, the rope will stretch and dangle but it will not brake.
What is it that we must do? We know we didn’t fool you, and yet we desperately ask ourselves:
How did you let us slip away?
Now our bodies may lay in decay.
And in all of this that has transpired there are not two words left too say…
Except we’re sorry.
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johndough111
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2003-01-31 09:00:00]
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Re: Porcelain Dreams
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 09:59:25 AM AEST
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Re: Porcelain Dreams
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by mckayla on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 11:50:00 PM AEST
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You must have written this in deep thought. I could feel it when I read it . Great write
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Re: Porcelain Dreams
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Re: Porcelain Dreams
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Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:34:55 AM AEST
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Sent a tingle up my spine so beautiful and sad. Wow dont what to say.
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