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My Dream
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
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Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 06:09:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I had a dream last night
and it was about you
we walked hand in hand
thru the streets without a care
you kept smiling at me
telling me it's alright
your eyes had that sparkle in them
that I've never seen before
and your voice was full of love
I kept thinking to myself
how wonderful it was
having you by my side.
But then I woke up
and realized it wasn't real
and it hurts to know that
but that's my dream
and hopefully it will come true
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whiteleo1984
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2006-03-23 18:09:26]
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Re: My Dream
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 08:00:52 PM AEST
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I sort of have had the same dream. And as you may know, and as you wrote it, it really feels so good.
But just when I woke up, it feels so bad hat I've sometimes cursed everything. You feel, like, impotence, like this huge anger inside.
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Re: My Dream
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by Alison on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:04:41 AM AEST
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| another short poem but very sweet. good write! |
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