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Golden Brown
Contributed by
hannah_heaven
on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 05:10:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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black skies
circle above
crisp green grass
below my feet
golden brown sunset
vultures approach my path
everywhere i walk
deaths my shadow
always a frown on my face
never a smile
grim reeper as my best friend
only so long before he gives me the chop
unlucky in love
so whats the point
because its everywhere
sunny and warm
just doesnt do me
widowed and hollow
i like to feel empty
the sound of a pin
as i swallow my fate
golden brown sunset
is falling behind the mountains
the crisp grass is leaving my feet
im rising upwards
my heart
.. dead beat
Copyright ©
hannah_heaven
... [
2006-03-23 17:10:33]
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Re: Golden Brown
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by jonquilcottage on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 05:37:33 PM AEST
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| I am glad it detoxed you as it seems such a sad poem regards jonquilcottage |
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Re: Golden Brown
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by brew on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 09:37:46 PM AEST
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Seemed it didnt help but it did to still know.......I am not sure. Did like the write, alot.
Brew~ |
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Re: Golden Brown
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by candysears on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 03:24:58 PM AEST
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A little sad,but it is written well!
I liked it!
God Bless! |
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