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Green Envies
Contributed by
MSU_freak
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Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 05:08:20 PM in AEST
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Kiss me,
Forever sleeping.
Kiss me,
my dying lips.
White lilies bleeding
Kiss me,
and they will live.
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MSU_freak
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2006-03-23 17:08:20]
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Re: Green Envies
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by jonquilcottage on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 05:39:23 PM AEST
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| mmm what were you thinking??? keep writing I actually like this |
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Re: Green Envies
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by MSU_freak on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 05:53:25 PM AEST
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| You know, I use to write better, when I didn't really know what I was doing, now I feel like I'm falling backwards. Poetry use to define me, I don't have writers block, I just don't feel the same emotions in my poetry that I use to. You know that feeling, like you just created something magnificent enough to touch someone, as if the words might jump out and hug you... Maybe I'm just crazy...if such a thing even exists!! |
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Re: Green Envies
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:03:41 PM AEST
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This is good. I do wonder what you were thinking though when you wrote this.. It is really good. I like this alot..
take care
christina |
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Re: Green Envies
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:59:47 PM AEST
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I truly adore this piece.
I cannot even begin to explain its excellence.
The symbolism, the figurative language, ageless beauty inside your imagery...
What ever it means it must live close to your soul.
I want more. |
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