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The Car Ride
Contributed by
Alison
on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 01:00:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We listened to hard rock,
For half an hour without any talk,
Your past you showed me,
And I spoke of mine to see,
Back, I leaned the set,
Took of my shoes and put up my feet,
I saw you glance my way and smile,
And we just drove for a long while,
Much did we say,
I wish I could stay,
In the car forever,
To go back to my demons never,
Can you fix me I thought?
Do you think I’m what you’ve sought?
I’ve never felt more safe as I did then,
I can’t wait for us to drive once again,
Far away from all the pain and sorrow,
So I ask you, can we go for a ride tomorrow?
Copyright ©
Alison
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2006-03-23 13:00:14]
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Re: The Car Ride
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by Lin54 on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 01:18:11 PM AEST
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The welcome escape from pain! Good write!
Linda |
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Re: The Car Ride
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by whiteleo1984 on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 01:59:34 PM AEST
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| the door is open and the choice is yurs |
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