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Mystery To Me
Contributed by
Savannah
on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You two fit together
Like peas in a pod
Two peas in a pod
But what about me?
I squeezed in
But sometimes I wonder if I'll ever fit
There are memories I don't have
Pictures I'm not in
"Just like old times"
That's a mystery to me
You two stand together
Like the last petals on a flower
The last two petals on a flower
But what about me?
I know how much you love me
But at times I think you love each other more
Two best friends against the world
And a shadow standing next to them
"Remember when..."
That's a mystery to me
You two need each other
Like the smile needs the tear
Like two smiles need two tears
But what about me?
I know how much fun we all have together
But could you have more fun without me?
Two girls making each other laugh
A third standing in the wings silently laughing
Just the two of you
Well
That's no mystery to me
Copyright ©
Savannah
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2003-01-31 06:30:00]
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Re: Mystery To Me
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by Arwen on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 10:55:35 AM AEST
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| jeeeez man u sound real depressed in this poem. Take heart...if these two friends really mean a lot to you, you should tell them how lonely and isolated you feel. They'll understand and who knows...things may look up hey? You'll probably think writing this poem silly some time in the future...but main thing is that you expressed yourself now! and you won't be bottling up the frustration and bitterness. This poem has good flow. thanx for sharing it. |
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Re: Mystery To Me
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 11:08:26 PM AEST
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Friendship, a well as love require no other reasons for their existence other than themselves. If you really like your friends, treat them in the way you'd like them to treat you, but don't expect anything in return--that's what friendship is purely about.
No point feeling like "But at times I think you love each other more/Two best friends against the world/And a shadow standing next to them..." I don't really share the same interests with mine own, but we still get along pretty well I'd say!
Take my advice to heart, I urge you. think on it over and over again. It is all about friendship, not usury.
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