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Painfully Beautiful
Contributed by
necronomy
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Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
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I play my sorrowed song in silence,
No one hears my death’s sweet serenade,
Shivering strings are tendons in my wrists,
And bow my razor blade.
A silent song sung in solitude,
That nobody can hear,
A melody that’s felt inside of you,
Not perceived with human ears.
I play my sadness oh so blue,
While my violin weeps red tears.
Copyright ©
necronomy
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2003-01-31 05:30:00]
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Re: Painfully Beautiful
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by tease_whizz on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 07:20:00 AM AEST
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| wow, this is a great write - i love the imagery you use. keep writing xxx |
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Re: Painfully Beautiful
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 10:33:30 AM AEST
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| Excellent................ |
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Re: Painfully Beautiful
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by roisin on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 07:57:54 PM AEST
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very taken with this very good write
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Re: Painfully Beautiful
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by Pigglet on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 11:53:44 PM AEST
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| wow,
unfortionatly this poem hits close to home. It was probably just 7 or 8 monts ago that i did that and it was just like your poem states. keep up the good work and hopefully if life hasn't gotten any better that i hope it will soon because i am feeling life the way it is sappose tobe felt and it feels really good.
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Re: Painfully Beautiful
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:19:04 AM AEST
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Oh, Necro this was the first poem I've read of yours and it was indeed painfully beautiful. Words cant describe how this made me feel.
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Re: Painfully Beautiful
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by mckayla on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 01:25:27 AM AEST
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great write!
mckayla |
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Re: Painfully Beautiful
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by exiled on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 02:40:35 PM AEST
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very interesting write. it is a lot like mine and a friend of mines writing he goes by unhloy soldier. why dont you read mine and i have another under my dads account called sleeping beauty tell me what you think of em.
once again i really like this and hope you keep coming with more.
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Re: Painfully Beautiful
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 09:24:00 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful, Necro.... Loved it.,.
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Re: Painfully Beautiful
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 01:26:16 AM AEST
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a very beautiful write. great imagery. can't wait to read more from you.
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Re: Painfully Beautiful
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 05:04:50 PM AEST
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| beautiful... |
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Re: Painfully Beautiful
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by vincy on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 11:57:03 PM AEST
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melancholy, the blood of silence
some modes remain unshareable
happiness is better shared. |
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