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I'm trying to be....
Contributed by
bethwood
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 04:43:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm trying to be the woman I've become
I'm 26 years old and I'm a single mum
My only hope is that I'm gettings things right
So at times I worry and can't sleep at night.
I have two beautiful boys, they are both five
They're my entire world, they keep me alive
They've bought into this life of mine
Unconditional love which feels devine.
I may be single, a Mum and a Dad
But to me it's an honour of which I'm so glad
For both of my boys I shine with pride
Through this journey of life, together we glide.
I want to be perfect,I'm trying my best
Though I wish I could put these worries to rest
But still I am the proudest and happiest mum
So I guess I AM the woman I've become.
Beth Wood
March '06
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bethwood
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Re: I'm trying to be....
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by lindy70 on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 05:09:29 PM AEST
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| hi beth, this is lovely too. I hope your boys will appreciate these poems later in life. well done. have took your challange up and have a poem for you ready it took me ten minutes to do and will let you have it at work tommorrow. ok love lyn.x |
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Re: I'm trying to be....
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by Sena on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:31:45 PM AEST
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| Beth, I can so relate! I loved it. Your boys are very lucky to have you as their mom. Sena |
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Re: I'm trying to be....
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:42:05 PM AEST
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wow this is a very happy write.. it gives you like a glimmer of gladness .. thats wonderful you have 2 boys. awesome write.. thanks for sharing
JENNI |
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Re: I'm trying to be....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 10:13:20 AM AEST
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| Well I don't think you have to "try" anymore. Four years later, with Carl at your side, you're DOING PERFECT! So far in my reads of your poetry, you display an open intimacy with your words. Congratulations! |
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