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My little log cabin
Contributed by
freespirit
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 03:47:23 PM in AEST
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Memories of my little log cabin
A little log cabin back in the woods
I'd love to live there if only I could
The smell of the pine trees down by the brook
A thousand memories written in books
The birch bark canoe down by the lake
The home made bannock that I used to bake
The fresh caught pickerel the blueberry cake
The pickles in the jars the ones that I make
The moose meat pies the beaver tail soup
The hat on my head we called a tuque
The wild berries the dandelion roots
The sound we made with our wooden flute
And the sweet smell silence that fill the night air
Makes we wish that I was still there
written by
Dorothy Calvert
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Re: My little log cabin
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 03:55:16 PM AEST
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This sounds like special memories of a haven of safety, love and security to me. I often think of my grandparents ranch. There was only a well for water, an outhouse, a wood stove for cooking and love everywhere. Fresh meat, fresh vegetables and the best pies and cakes you could ever eat. Special memories I will always cherish.
Lovely write,
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Re: My little log cabin
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 05:53:37 PM AEST
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It sounds wonderful. I can imagine that it must be very inspiring too, and lovely to stay at in the summer.
I love the images in this. They almost make me jealous. I would love to one day live sopmewhere like that...It must be so peaceful.
Anyway, nice write, I think it could have done without so many 'The's but overall, a nice write.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: My little log cabin
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:06:23 PM AEST
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| This is good! You have a good sense of imagery in your poem. I am fond of this one because you bring the reader to your inspired spot with grace and simplicity. |
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Re: My little log cabin
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 05:47:12 AM AEST
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Gee !
I like this re-do as much as the first.: )
Memories are living the past--enjoy the moments.
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Re: My little log cabin
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 09:52:09 AM AEST
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This sounds so idealistic.
I remember making dandelion coffee from the root it tasted of a** hasten to add I never made it again!
This has reminded me I need to get at one with nature again and make some more wine.
This has made me so nostalgic for the simple life i once had.
J. |
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