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Changes
Contributed by
Alma
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:02:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In the name of god and all
That is twisted and sacred
Change the way you think
Change what you feel
For the love of everything you
Consider holy
Stop being the only barrier
And you
You blinded followers
Use your mind for once
I’m sick of being considered an outcast
I’ll survive through the image of you
I’ll be the black sheep among
White crows
In the name of all that is
Wrongly beautiful
And unbearably pure
Don’t disregard me
I’m pure and beautiful spirit
Don’t cast away your new salvation
Copyright ©
Alma
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2006-03-22 14:02:21]
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Re: Changes
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by iris666 on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:45:20 PM AEST
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great write strong song with lot of anger go girl your good friend and great fan
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Re: Changes
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:31:54 PM AEST
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This is a powerful piece of work. Well done! The imagery is very fresh, and shows a fine skill. And the theme is a good one, challenging one to look deeper.
Keep up the good work. This is excellent.
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