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Goodbye old life, Hello new life
Contributed by
sugarlips
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 11:13:18 AM in AEST
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Goodbye Old Life, Hello New Life
goodbye old life, hello new life
I'm sure you'll be better than the last one,
course that's not hard to beat
you'll be filled with happines and fun
rather than the last life,
which consisted of sorrow and tears
we'll have so much fun together,
no one's here to stop us
we'll be at our own little paradise
we can always be with the people we love
and never be alone
we can forget all the bad things that happened in the last life
and just be in eternal bliss
just you and me, life
we can be the happiest we can ever be
hope you liked it!
sugarlips <3
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sugarlips
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2006-03-22 11:13:18]
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Re: Goodbye old life, Hello new life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 01:50:59 PM AEST
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Sometimes we all need a new, fresh start :)
Nice write |
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Re: Goodbye old life, Hello new life
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by crazy on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:13:08 PM AEST
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| ahhh.so sweet .this is me i gave up my old sad life it always had sad thoughts depression ,BUT now i live a better life to which i am much happier |
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