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The End
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:33:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In his arms she felt weak
Was she now becoming meek?
Warming was his voice
But she had no choice
As he reached for her neck
She reached for the wood object
His teeth began her skin to pierce
She let out a shriek so very fierce
And plunged the spike into his heart
Which set off in him sparks
No longer master of his fate
To die in this alley surely second rate
She watched as to dust he returned
But for his touch she still yearned
Her sister now was avenged
So with a knife she met her end
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Re: The End
(User Rating: 1 ) by OzChick on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:47:35 AM AEST (User
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Tragic ending to this one. Very poetic and a fitting sequel to the first. Bravo.
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Re: The End
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 11:47:09 AM AEST (User
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dark and chilling loved it
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Re: The End
(User Rating: 1 ) by crazy on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:20:54 PM AEST (User
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vamps, romance,and death and love all go hand in ahdn.i love the first one the second one i love more for the story was told in such a wonderful way.x celent job |
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Re: The End
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:51:32 PM AEST (User
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wow this is a very interesting and powerful write.. this is very unique and enjoyable.. great job thanks for sharing
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Re: The End
(User Rating: 1 ) by bakacaka on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:50:08 PM AEST (User
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this is a great poem because even though you use couplets it doesnt sound elementary
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Re: The End
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 04:30:06 PM AEST (User
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Shari this poem was very special, in as much as everyone reading it will have a different interputation. I loved the line at the last "But for his touch she still yearned. Brings to mind many memories for me and others, having to rid ourselves of those that hurt, but still would like to stay for the good part!
Marvelous writing, feelings, emotions on the surface, with wisdom between the lines.
Wonderful
Warm love,
ConSue |
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