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a bout me
Contributed by
weeme
on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:32:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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about me
she smiles with all she has got left
yet her tears are left undried
though she has so much to say
yet she bottles it up inside
if you look passed her broken eyes
to a shadow that no one sees
and disguised so you wont recongnize
that, that girl is really me
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weeme
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2006-03-22 09:32:00]
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Re: a bout me
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by sugarlips on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 11:15:05 AM AEST
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good poem, haha sounds a lot like myself in some ways.....
keep up the good work!
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Re: a bout me
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by Kiela_Rox_Mi_Socks on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 05:36:48 PM AEST
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Hi.
I can re late 2 this poem.
Good Work!!!!
-hug-
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Re: a bout me
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by crazy on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:23:03 PM AEST
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| kool write.i think we all have a secret to which we hide.i like this alot.good job |
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