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Honeysuckle Twilight
Contributed by
nosoup4crr
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:04:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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real magic exists
in dandelion breezes,
fall carnivals, longer kisses goodnight—
In standing at my BACKDOOR,
Inhaling humid honesuckle twilight,
the humming ghosts of dead sons
pleading under orange streetlight constellations—
keep the door closed, go
out and play.
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nosoup4crr
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2006-03-22 09:04:35]
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Re: Honeysuckle Twilight
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 06:51:17 PM AEST
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I really like this. Every line is wonderful.It's very short, but very effective and there is so much beautiful imagery in those few lines.
It really is magical.
I really love this.
Great write.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Honeysuckle Twilight
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by crazy on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:26:39 PM AEST
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| such fantasy in this to what my mind dose put the words.makes me think of the long good bye kisses that ive had.lol!!!! every line had something to offer sweet write |
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