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Toghether
Contributed by
olhip
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Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 03:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'll only ask for love and care.
Perhaps a big soft teddy bear.
I want to see the Earths green trees.
Jump and run through autumb leaves.
I'll fill your heart with endless joy.
Whether I'm a girl or boy.
On occassions I might cry.
But I'm too small to tell you why.
Together we can jump and run.
We'll fill our lives with endless fun.
Just give me the chance to call you mother.
Before you there shall be no other.
Together we'll reach out for the stars.
Pretend this whole big world is ours.
As you teach me right from wrong.
I'll try to make your life a song.
I'm not at all prepared to die.
Before I have my first good cry.
And tho I'm not quite truly here.
I love you bunches mother dear.
Copyright ©
olhip
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2003-01-31 03:30:00]
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Re: Toghether
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 10:43:30 AM AEST
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| brilliant.... |
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Re: Toghether
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 11:52:56 AM AEST
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| Very good write ... sweet and heartfelt. |
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Re: Toghether
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 12:08:47 PM AEST
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| This was a very touching write I wrote a poem (No title) On abortion from the babys point of view its a subject that I feel strongly about,so sad! Goo job!Christina |
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Re: Toghether
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:02:13 AM AEST
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Hey this was a good poem I liked it. I am also pro-life way to go more should read this.
Beautiful
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Toghether
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by olhip on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 11:31:01 PM AEST
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| Appreciate the feedback,I strongly consider this a topic worthy of all the attention it can get. |
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Re: Toghether
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by olhip on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 11:40:55 PM AEST
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| Thanks,attention unfortunately is all we have reguarding hopes of undoing what I consider a very sad situation. |
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