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Looks to kill.
Contributed by
UrbanFlower
on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 06:31:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I saw you there tonight.
the one with the smile, and looks to kill.
You saw me too.
Don't pretend you couldn't see through clouded eyes.
With a bottle in hand
And a glint in your eye.
You wanted to hurt me as much as I you.
And when the music died down, and the crowd thinned out,
When that girl forgot how to dance
You and I forgot each other
And went our seperate ways.
Later in the night, i saw you again.
This time you could not move.
You could not object.
Forced to listen for once in your life.
I guess this is the last time.
Surreal as it may be...it's no ******* dream.
Because I know you saw me.
You saw my plea, my promise, my hope.
And I saw your back.
Again.
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UrbanFlower
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2006-03-22 06:31:07]
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Re: Looks to kill.
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by cupcake__violence on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 06:53:20 AM AEST
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very good write.
that has happened to me before
keep up the great work
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Re: Looks to kill.
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by PLformalyknownasPpaul on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:13:24 AM AEST
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keep writting
its a disipline worth getting into
not everying will work
but when it does
i like this poem
maby like is the wrong word
i admire the concentration of emotion and the clarity of expression
the poet speaks truth
not reality truth
the truth behind or beyond the actuality
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Re: Looks to kill.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:37:32 AM AEST
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Very powerful you've expressed your feelings superbly here, putting pen to paper can help sooth the emotions so much.
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