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Why Daughter Why
Contributed by
sadaddy
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 01:26:57 AM in AEST
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Why Daughter Why do you hurt me this way.
Why Daughter Why do you make me feel these pain this way.
Why Daughter Why do you continue to say those things.
Why Daughter Why do you continue making me feel this way by the things you say.
Why Daughter Why can’t you make this hurt go away.
Why Daughter Why can’t you make this feeling of pain go away.
Why Daughter Why can’t you stop saying those things.
Why Daughter Why are you so mean to me by the things you say.
Why Daughter Why are these things you say so hurtful and painful to me I say.
Why Daughter Why don’t you stop saying these things.
Why Daughter Why don’t you stop making me feel this way.
Why Daughter Why don’t you know by saying these things you are killing me so.
Why Daughter Why can’t you say good things to me.
Why Daughter Why can’t you just stop saying these things.
Why Daughter Why can’t you just love me for who I am.
Why Daughter Why do you say I hate you so.
Why Daughter Why do you say I have hurt that way.
Why Daughter Why do you feel this way when I have not hurt you in that way I say.
Why Daughter Why can we not just get along like when you were my little girl.
Why Daughter Why can we not make amends to all these things.
Why Daughter Why can we not stop fighting these way.
Why Daughter Why can we not both say enough is enough and bring these to an end.
Because all I can say is that I still love you anyways.
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Re: Why Daughter Why
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by dougnut on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:21:31 AM AEST
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A sad emotional poem of true life
I found it a bit repetative maybe if you took out the first "WHY DAUGHTER WHY "
of each sentance,It may flow a little better.
(only my humble opinion").
other than that a good poem.
sadly the content is one that goes on in everyday life.
hope the situation improves God bless you.
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Re: Why Daughter Why
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by Lin54 on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 03:50:14 PM AEST
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Sometimes we can't think of anything else to say but Why Why Why--I have cried out to the Lord when worries overwhelm me and just ask why! It can be redundit--but then our hearts cry is that way!
You cry out what we all cry out!
Linda |
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Re: Why Daughter Why
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 11:53:14 PM AEST
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Sad but well said write.
emember this too soon shall pass.
Keep the faith and hang tuff.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Why Daughter Why
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by Lilly-Quill on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 04:09:27 AM AEST
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This touches me deeply beyond words. Every line is an emotional outcry against an continual harmful pattern. I pray God grants peace and the answer to your heart's cry. This is profoundly relevant.
Thoughtful regards,
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Re: Why Daughter Why
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by ever1der on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 11:21:05 PM AEST
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Repetition and retention..I believe in that..and I believe that your heart is crying out..why daughter why..other than the repetition I enjoyed it..and it should be this instead of these
in "bring this to an end".. |
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Re: Why Daughter Why
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by Oneir8dude on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 11:25:17 PM AEST
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"Because all I can say is that I still love you anyways."
Your a Daddy that's what we do my Friend...
Everytime she breaks your heart think in the back
of your head in 10 years she will have wisened up
and she will know the meaning of life is family...
My heart goes out to you... With all your pain my friend
you still leave your blessings with me and others...
If you ever need to talk IM me on msn messenger williamconkel904@msn.com
May you find your peace with your daughter soon... For
she doesn't know the errors of her ways YET
She will my friend
Bill |
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