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Diary
Contributed by
Kitsune
on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 06:54:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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It falls open
like the most natural thing in the world
Dog-eared pages
framed with ink-stained thumbprints
Flocks of words
herded within the cramped confines of college-ruled paper
Twisting, bending
leaning on each other for support
Hiding names that hide
confessions
answers
that lead to more questions than they’re worth
testimonies posing as hasty scrawls
adjectives soaked in guilt
epiphanies cornered by commas
and
the
words
shiver
down
the
page
chilled by their own meaning
Desperately scrambling at the edges
clawing their way through choppy sentences
Shocking themselves with letters that
crumble
and
quiver
and
leave not the tiniest ounce of doubt
to what they mean
and to what they could mean
Copyright ©
Kitsune
... [
2006-03-21 18:54:20]
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Re: Diary
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 08:37:58 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC :D
You have a good start here, this is an interesting piece of poetry. I am not exactly sure what you mean it to be about, but I love the image of the words shivering down the page, and I think the first 8 lines are very well written and are saying something many say, ina unique way.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy your time here at YPDC.
Great write,
*hugs*
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Re: Diary
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 08:11:14 PM AEST
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Wow, I've never read a poem like that. It's really good! It's got a unique style! Great job!
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