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I Am Wrecked-Feathered Wing
Contributed by
marionette
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Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:18:12 PM in AEST
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Upward, downward, high & low
Arms of feathers that doesn't know where to go.
Wind scraping & feather grinding
Finding, it's probably somewhere I am searching.
It screeches loud, earsplitting sing
I am the wreck-feathered wing.
Ivory colored majestic feathers
Flapping gracefully, growing steadier.
Each time it wags, one might fall
Uncaring; only one fell--not all.
Hence each fallen feather, descending down
Will find their way onto defiled ground.
It doesn't know because it can't see
Each feathers are like a family.
One will define, will represent
Many meanings, certain element
Of power & weakness, failure & hope
Of grieving forever, or knowing to cope.
Lose a feather, that means will go
Learn how to right wrong, then it will again grow.
You find your ways with waiting still
That strange ability, your patient skill.
Just waiting, although doing nothing
Until they grow, feather of sheer hoping.
Then again... you lose what you grew
Still you're stubborn, it'll grow again, you knew.
Standing there at the morn's moist dew
Starting over, to something fresh & new.
Such lucky birds flying up so high
Upward, downward, in the sky.
& here I am, like a leftover feast
With no more feathers... a naked beast.
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marionette
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2006-03-21 12:18:12]
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Re: I Am Wrecked-Feathered Wing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:27:30 PM AEST
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| I'm not too sure I get it either, but I do know that i like it...A LOT! |
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Re: I Am Wrecked-Feathered Wing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 06:56:12 PM AEST
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| Don't know if i really got it but maybe it could be about you struggling through something although who isn't ever struggling to make it through the next day. So people can relate and to each its own interpretation Can tell you that i did like it Great Job |
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Re: I Am Wrecked-Feathered Wing
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:00:37 AM AEST
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| Great discriptions and imagry. The ending couplet was my favorite. |
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