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The Eve of War

Contributed by Ikkie on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 11:34:07 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

you clone
you see
you can
never be
you drone
you seek
you do what
the [xxxx] they please
incapable
free thought screams
another bred army of killing machines

where is your messiah
no longer
no one to save you now
dead martyrs
much more
than war
more than you will ever be able
to comprehend

its not
my fate
to be
the same
its not
my hate
that drives
their pain
fighting for
what you cant believe
another lost army of hating machines

where is your messiah
no longer
no one to save you now
dead martyrs
much more
than war
more than you will ever be able
to comprehend

mechanical (death machines)
chemical (the alpha breed)
biological (genetic flaws)
metaphysical (immaterial)
you are
you are
you know
you are
all the same
all bred from a twisted seed
spawned again to take our place

this will be the time for us to
end your reign of masturbation
this will be our prelude
the eve of your annihilation

where is your messiah
no longer
no one to save you now
dead martyrs
much more
than war
more than you will ever be able
to comprehend

if defeat is what you fear
we become your phobia
you now know your time is near
we are taking over

Copyright © Ikkie ... [ 2006-03-21 11:34:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Eve of War (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 01:49:56 PM AEST
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NOT BAD!!! I genraly like it but next time let us know what kind of style it is, that helps to know.

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