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a thought
Contributed by
weeme
on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 04:32:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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a thought
In a forgotten thought
In a forgotten dream
In a forgotten place
That I have once seen
+++++
I remember the smell
I remember no fights
I remember the person
That was caught by my sights
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Its coming back
Its coming fast
The forgotten place
That had once passed
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It’s as clear as day
It’s as fresh in my mind
The time that I spent there
Is now left behind
Copyright ©
weeme
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2006-03-21 04:32:39]
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Re: a thought
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 12:22:18 PM AEST
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Great poem. I liked it alot. I liked the rhyming pattern that you had used..
Take care
christina |
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Re: a thought
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by kaypa on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 02:31:45 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem... it reminded me of a thought and a guy i once went out with... |
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Re: a thought
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by ponginas on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 11:39:25 AM AEST
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| short but good use of rhyming..sweet poem |
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Re: a thought
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by EmilyMichaela on
Wednesday, 6th May 2009 @ 06:34:24 PM AEST
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| This poem reminds me of a situation between me and a guy. It's so sweet |
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