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with just one word
Contributed by
jdawg
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Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:37:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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with just one word, you stole my heart,
with just one word, I prayed we would never be apart.
with just one word, I felt something new,
with just one word, I found you.
with just one word, you made me whole,
with just one word, I can't let go.
with just one word, you made my life worth while,
with just one word, you made me smile.
with just one word, you made me sigh,
with just one word, you made me cry.
with just one word, you made time fly by,
with just one word, you told me "HI".
~Justin L.~
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Re: with just one word
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:43:43 AM AEST
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just two words...
nice write!
J. |
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Re: with just one word
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by jonquilcottage on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 06:14:15 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this one...word, jonquilcottage |
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Re: with just one word
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by MomentOfHappiness on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 08:36:17 PM AEST
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| I have a poem similar to this one, you have a writing style like mine, i like it. keep up the good work. |
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Re: with just one word
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by one-curly-fry on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 02:51:32 AM AEST
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Another hopeless romantic I take it?
I've falling for women just as easily ('The upside down world' is about a new girl I saw at work for the first time and got into a conversation with and found a real kindred in her - I was head over heels for her until I learnt that she had a boyfriend... lol)
Nice write - good feeling in it.
- Tim |
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