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When We First Met
Contributed by
sadaddy
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Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:53:02 AM in AEST
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When we first met you use to pinch me and punch me because that’s what little girls do.
You use to tell me that I was stupid and things like that.
As months went by you use to tease me and taunt me because that’s what girls do.
Then one day you began to notice me for me.
You began to tease me in a different way because that’s what teenage girls do.
You began to look at me in a different way
Then we became friends that would talk each and every day
Before you know it we became more than friends
We started dating for years and years
I told you that you were the only one so many times that year
When I asked you to marry me that first time
You said we were way too young.
Another year past by when I asked you again
Again you replied we were still too young.
The day came when I left and went away to join the Army that mid year.
I was deployed so far, far away in that distant land
We continued to communicate the best way we could
This was enough for me to ask you for the third time if we could
You finally broke down and said we should this is what I wanted for the past two years
So I flew home as fast as I could before you were able to change your mind
It finally came true that clear and sunny day back there in December of eighty-three.
Now years have gone by and by we are still together for this is why
You are still my best friend and my lover that is true
We have had some good times and some bad times this is no lie
But you are always there by my side for when it means the most I don’t know why
When I was healthy and when I was sick even when we had money and then we had none
We made this commitment when we were very young you have stuck with me this is true
For this I will always love you forever and forever my only true love until my life is through.
Written By Scott Austin
Copyright ©
sadaddy
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2006-03-21 00:53:02]
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Re: When We First Met
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 12:13:01 PM AEST
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WELCOME SCOTT WELCOME!!!!!
We are so happy to have you aboard!!! And you lovely poems are going to be enjoyed by all of us here at YPDC.
This was very moving indeed. A warm feeling around my heart was felt as I read about your True and Only Love. Most people go all of their lives without ever experience this loving feeling. I'm so happy for you and yours!
Enjoyed this very much............Keep up the good work Scott, and Welcome again!
Warm love
Lovingcritters
ConSue
P.S I hate zeros! |
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Re: When We First Met
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:47:55 PM AEST
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Friend you almost made my heart skip a beat or two
while reading your poem, those loving words of yours
were echoes of my heart beat too.
Though my wife is no more;
but I am sure she would have loved it too.
Friend I am sure and believe those were true words; right out of your heart.
FRANCO
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Re: When We First Met
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 11:48:04 PM AEST
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Very beautifull write and u r so lucky to have the staying kindda luv.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: When We First Met
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 04:12:56 AM AEST
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A refreshing write..nice to read after all the "singin' the blues..
which I'm prone to do myself. |
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Re: When We First Met
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by BigDaddy on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 05:14:45 PM AEST
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I enjoyed your poem very much. It parallels the story of my Wife and I. We lived across the street from each since we were 10 yrs. old. We became very good friends and it blossomed from there. It was not as easy as I made it sound. Both of us went through some very trying times before we realized we were meant for each other.
If I could pick out the one thing in your poem as being the key to the longevity in our relationship it would be friendship. We were and continue to be best friends to this very day. Thanks
P.S.
If you get a chance please read my poem "I Love". It falls along the same path as your poem. Thanks |
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Re: When We First Met
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by sandypoet on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 05:29:11 AM AEST
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| You could not had written a better love poem. I really enjoyed it, I saw my life in your poem. You have what girls do down to a tee. How they act and what a beautiful life you have together. |
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Re: When We First Met
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by Sasha on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 01:29:27 AM AEST
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| Excellent write, I loved this poem, there is always something so truly amazing about finding true love, isnt there? |
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Re: When We First Met
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by Oneir8dude on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 11:19:40 PM AEST
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Very Nice work Mrs. Austin sounds like a smart
woman through out your poem...
She married you didn't she?
Gotta be a smart woman...
Thank You Mr. Austin...
Your friend Bill
(And I find out your a military man... went from
friend to hero in one push of the keyboard key..) |
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