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No control
Contributed by
nothingness
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 11:15:20 PM in AEST
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I lost control of all i had now i just turn my head and take each blow
My will to live is gone my life is nothing but an empty shadow
I am lost and forgotten nothing to follow nothing to chase
Everything once loved ruined and destroyed nothing left what a waste
I am empty and by myself again, forgot to love forgot to care
I turned my back on the world now i need it and its not there
I am broken and i am scared, always forgetting always blind
Nothing is there to look for, nothing is there worth trying to find
There is nothing i can do anymore but accept what comes my way
Every night i go to sleep and every time i wake to live out each dying day
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2006-03-20 23:15:20]
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Re: No control
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:07:13 AM AEST
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oh wow...deep, passionate..i loved it, the sad part is how many of us can relate.... fantastically written.
~natalya |
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Re: No control
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by slowlysinking on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:27:52 AM AEST
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| I liked this a lot...such a strong feeling of defeat.... |
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Re: No control
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by jdawg on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:42:20 AM AEST
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can definately relate.. great write. keep head help high. and wish for the best.. keep up great work. god bless and best wishes.
~Justin L.~ |
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Re: No control
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by dougnut on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 08:23:24 AM AEST
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Continue to vent out your feelings.
Nothingness.
There are people here who care.
Remember Thoughts are living things with wings.
You are not alone while you have somebody
Thinking about you.
I KNOW you can move foirward.
keep writing and sharing OK.
Doug. God bless you. |
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Re: No control
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:15:26 PM AEST
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| Wow. I really liked this poem. It was like you went picking through my brain. Great write. |
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