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A long way to go
Contributed by
pureheart07
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 11:03:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A long way to go.
Already I have been traped seald & scared.
Broken tron beating & saulaughter.
I have risen from hell & seen heaven.
I have wished apon stars & opend the door of suffering.
Yet trough all the paths I have been through.
Each hrut scar & wound.
There is still more to learn unflod
discrovery & be seen.
I welcome lifes advanters both good & bad with open arms.
Wiating for lifes unforggtten paths to chose the next.
For now I wiat for all the doors of opprintny to open at once.
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pureheart07
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2006-03-20 23:03:58]
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Re: A long way to go
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 12:45:38 AM AEST
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| this is not crap..just try spell check and you will have a brilliant write. oh and...nothing you write could be a waste of time to read..because words are amazing that way..no matter who uses them they can take a blank page and turn it into a masterpeice.. |
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Re: A long way to go
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by brew on
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Agreed completely with purple.....Spell ck..I know so well, i am one whos types so fast and then posts...! Was a good flow of words that was given to the readers form the self.~
Brew~ |
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