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I Love You
Contributed by
timbothepyro
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There were
Unfinished poems with your name at the top
But writing them hurt so I made myself stop
There were
Other girls that I thought I could love
But it was only you that I thought the world of
There were
So many times that I didn't know what to do
overwhelmed by emotions caused by losing you
Maybe I
Should've been quiet and let you get on with your life
But it's hard when for so long I thought you'd be my wife
Maybe I
Could've won your heart back if I tried hard enough
But I gave up on love 'cause the emotions were rough
But I
Want another chance because your always on my mind
And isn't it funny how true love can make you blind
Because I
Get caught up thinking about the times that we shared
And the thought of losing you is making me scared
So I'm
Telling you now that you make me short of breath
And if it means anything, I love you to death.
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timbothepyro
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2006-03-20 21:23:08]
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Re: I Love You
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by oreo_kisses on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:57:34 PM AEST
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| wow.. i really like this poem. i know what your feeling in a way but i am the female and he is the guy..lol.. i have been dealing with it sice august now. and i know how you are feeling somewhat... great write... |
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Re: I Love You
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by jdawg on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:48:27 AM AEST
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great write i can really relate to this. best of wishes and god bless.
~Justin L.~ |
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Re: I Love You
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by Adelle on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 03:42:09 AM AEST
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SO AMAZING- WOW- WHAT MORE CAN I SAY? BUT FIGHT FOR HER-
SHANNA |
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Re: I Love You
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by timbothepyro on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 11:18:37 AM AEST
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| thanks for the good reviews....she started crying so bad when she read this....but i think it was for the better cuz shes coming home from college to come visit me :-) |
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Re: I Love You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 06:01:47 PM AEST
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I really like this.
Wow, reminds me of the past.
REally well described emotion.
I can say that I like this infinite times.
It's exactly how I could feel in some momments. |
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Re: I Love You
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by Concrete_Rose on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 01:48:19 PM AEST
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| I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM...BREATH TAKING..... |
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