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Broken
Contributed by
mischild
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 08:23:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It makes me so sad to see
How much you care for me
Because I can't really say
That I love you the same way
It's breaks my heart to see you cry
It's almost torture to say goodbye
Please don't be mad at me
It's not my fault we're not meant to be
Copyright ©
mischild
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2006-03-20 20:23:32]
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Re: Broken
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by dougnut on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 08:43:20 PM AEST
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Sometimes In Life it seems cruel to be kind.
But I feel sure you made the right decision.
Honesty is the best Policy.
great read and write.
be happy.
God bless you.
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Re: Broken
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 03:20:18 AM AEST
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I ditto the previous comment.
Nice write well done.
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Re: Broken
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 03:49:16 AM AEST
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I've been on both sides of this dilemma, and your poem spoke to one side so plainly and, well, sensitively. I hope you write one about the lovestruck sometime.
Spike |
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