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The Dark Sea
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 06:57:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Across the darkness of the sea
a voice rose up and spoke to me
telling me of the great things that I was to do
but never told me about you.
I thought that forever I would be me
but you came and changed what I would be
thru all of my days
I hoped that you would come my way.
Now looking across this dark sea
I asked the voice who she would be
I asked if she would have hair like the bright sun
and if her voice could calm even the darkest one
I asked what kind of person she would be
and that if she even knew me
the voice replied with a voice that cheered me up
and I thanked that voice and asked that things would be perfect from above
The voice replied with a calm talk
and told me to be careful how i would walk
told me to always be true to me
and never come back to the darkness of the sea.
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2006-03-20 18:57:20]
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Re: The Dark Sea
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by freespirit on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 07:20:55 PM AEST
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nice poem I enjoyed the read
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Re: The Dark Sea
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by Alison on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:20:39 PM AEST
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| very well written! good feeling in it, and the best thing of all is the since of hope thats given. great write! |
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