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Realism is Overrated
Contributed by
eleventoedsloth
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 05:24:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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We ooze the innovative.
"Realistically?" you ask.
"Realistically, we never had a dying chance."
This is foul play.
This is a waste of time.
However, I'd like for you to waste all of my time.
"I'm addicted to your happiness" was whispered,
following the first kiss we shared.
You're no addiction.
You're a cure, to something greater.
Something that was killing me, cell by cell.
"Realistically?" you asked.
"Realistically, it's useless... but, I wont settle for the inevitable."
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eleventoedsloth
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2006-03-20 17:24:32]
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Re: Realism is Overrated
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 06:08:48 PM AEST
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| great write. too many good writes go unnoticed whilst mediocrity is praised a lot. well i might have ranted but i really enjoyed this. |
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Re: Realism is Overrated
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by brew on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:30:02 PM AEST
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Seems there is realism , yet not to the otherl.........I know , most use it, and then BACK out.......isnt it .well....! Great write of how things are seen, yet not.
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Re: Realism is Overrated
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 12:53:52 AM AEST
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| Aewsome! And I agree with the title 100%... |
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