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Now or Never
Contributed by
amyrattz
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 05:04:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Now or never
By Amy
Free from life and all its hate,
Free from pain and sorrow.
I cannot wait to meet my fate,
And will not live tomorrow.
I’ve been through thick; I’ve been through thin,
I didn’t do my best.
‘Cos every moment was torturing,
That torture now must rest.
Don’t ask me how, don’t ask me why,
These feelings came about.
People tell me I must try,
But this is my only way out.
In fact go ahead and ask me,
There’s a reason behind pain.
The bullies no one could ever see,
They are the one’s to blame.
To those of you who hated me,
I’d like to let you know,
You drove me to my misery,
You made me let life go.
You’ll live your lives now knowing,
You’re the reason I’m not here.
Because now I’m no longer going,
Through a life you filled with fear.
I sorry for everything that I’ve done.
I’m sorry if I’ve put you through pain.
But don’t you worry because soon ill be gone
And you’ll never see me again.
Good bye my friends ill miss you all.
You made my life worth living.
You’d pick me up when I would fall.
So I hope you’ll be forgiving.
I fell way to far this time.
I missed out on a lot.
I know that the fault’s not mine.
And this is my last shot.
Just one shot is all I’ll make,
To end my pain forever.
This is my one last chance to take,
I hate to say it’s now or never!
Copyright ©
amyrattz
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2006-03-20 17:04:18]
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Re: Now or Never
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by Rhymingron on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 05:51:48 PM AEST
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| I don't like this kind of poetry, but it was so well done. I am an optimist who can glean something good out of most things. I too have been the thick and thin, but have always been able to lookk ahead. Please, don't dwell on those who hate you. I don't mean to sound preachy, but you have a talent that shouldn't be wasted. Keep writing. |
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Re: Now or Never
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 07:01:39 PM AEST
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I sometimes enjoy this poetry, but sometimes it makes me think about my life, and make me feel sad.
It is really well written, I liked it a lot, but remember there's always a bright side for everything. Don't always hide in the darkness, sometimes it is good to cofront reality, so reality won't eat you alive and realize you are better than it thinks. |
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Re: Now or Never
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by freespirit on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 07:29:00 PM AEST
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I dont like this kind of poetry iI find it depressing why try to make us all sad
I get tired of reading about people trying to kill them self go get some help than come back and write something different its ok to express your self than write about other things also good luck
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Re: Now or Never
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by mischild on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 07:44:15 PM AEST
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| Very powerful . I felt it deeply . |
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