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Gambrinous the Great
Contributed by
AliB
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 03:07:50 PM in AEST
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Gambrinous the Great
With trusty steed and Gowpen
Travelled forth to Yclept
In search of the Nelipot.
Wading through tall Dactylion
Growing Agraffe and Wanweird
in the midday Brontide,
They encountered the Pentrichor.
A fight was fought,
Jentacular.
The outcome?
Liripipe!
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Re: Gambrinous the Great
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 03:12:22 PM AEST
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Ummm yeah nice one! (scurries away to find his dictionary) lol
I've heard of trusty, steed and a few others but apart from that i'm lost!
Nice one.
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Re: Gambrinous the Great
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 03:20:12 PM AEST
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| If you paid for a course like that, i'd ask for my money back. |
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Re: Gambrinous the Great
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 06:50:49 PM AEST
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These are certainly strange words. However, the words which I actually managed to find in my dictionary don't make sense in the context which they are written;
Y'clept, may mean travelling forth to call, but there's no sense in wading through tall middle-finger tips, nor armour shackles growing, or the eventual outcome being a scarf. (?)
It would have been good if this had worked, but I can't see how it does, unfortunately.
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Re: Gambrinous the Great
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 10:20:06 PM AEST
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In creating a piece of poetry or prose from a wordbank, the words are to be used in context to have the exercise make sense. This has no rhyme or reason unless it was just to marry rhyming words (which is irrational to me). Great effort but truth is much more vivid than fiction.
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Re: Gambrinous the Great
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by AliB on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 03:47:13 AM AEST
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It wasn't meant to make any sense with the meaning of the words!!
We weren't told the words were real until after the exercise.
We had to use our 'imagination'?
Oh well, win some, lose some lol.
Ali |
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Re: Gambrinous the Great
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by amaya_h_k on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:50:20 PM AEST
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so if I look the words up will it make more sense?
Oh well. I like it, its funny...and a little confusing.
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Re: Gambrinous the Great
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by Dawny on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 04:44:18 PM AEST
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Well I confess I didnt understand half of it lol, that said I dont think I could have done such a good job with words I didnt understand!!
Well done mate, and for what its worth I think some of these comments are a bit harsh, as you said it was only a bit of fun!!
Love Dawny xxx |
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