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Because of you
Contributed by
Nothingness
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 02:43:14 PM in AEST
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Another tear falls to the ground
My grief so strong but yet unsound
Yet one thought keeps me from drowning in the tears
That you are there sympathizing through my pain and fears
No one asked you to take the time on me
But you did, you answered when no one would hear my plea
You gave me your words and showed me I am not alone
You took my pain and my worries and made them your own
I will never know how to show you what a difference you have made
Because of you, instead of picking up the gun that night I got on my knees and prayed
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Nothingness
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Re: Because of you
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 04:37:59 PM AEST
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A touching write!! I am sorry for your loss but happy that you were able to write this....
Stay strong..
Jenni |
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Re: Because of you
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 05:52:40 PM AEST
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This heart-felt sentimate brought tears to my eyes.
I am so very grateful to the individual that was able to be there for you in your time of need.
Stay strong and keep writing.
*hugs*
~Shannon |
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Re: Because of you
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by dougnut on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 06:52:29 PM AEST
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Heartfelt Write, Emotional.
I am pleased you were helped.
God Bless You
Keep Writing ,Keep Reading, Keep Praying.
Doug,
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Re: Because of you
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by brew on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:16:17 PM AEST
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Shows their are ONES who care........ So sorry that the loss was part of you, and someone who was close. Man,I would of been like yourself. What do you do? Glad tho,........heart fealt write
Brew~ |
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Re: Because of you
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by Nothingness on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:34:52 PM AEST
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| thank you all for careing it really means alot |
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Re: Because of you
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by Lucy on
Sunday, 8th July 2007 @ 12:00:10 AM AEST
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This so touching
Lucy
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