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FROM THE GRAVE
Contributed by
lindy70
on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 02:40:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Does he know, what he has done?
The man that did this hit and run.
Here am I buried deep down,
All because of some drunken clown.
I can see him now, standing there,
A drink in his hand, he doesn't care.
Merry Christmas, Happy New Year,
Come on mate, have another beer.
Left behind are my children and wife,
With just pictures and memories of my life.
I didn't ask to die, I was still young,
Life was geat; it had only just begun.
I'm standing here now, next to him,
Watching him laughing, drinking gin.
I scream and shout, but he can't hear,
If I could cry, I'd cry a tear.
Please will you listen, listen to me,
What you're doing is wrong. Can't you see?
Okay celebrate, great, have a jar,
But please, please, don't take the car.
linda walker
20.3.06
Copyright ©
lindy70
... [
2006-03-20 14:40:50]
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Re: FROM THE GRAVE
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by freespirit on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 03:03:18 PM AEST
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I hope people read this and get the message dont drink and drive
GOOD WRITE 4 STARS
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Re: FROM THE GRAVE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 03:21:09 PM AEST
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Yeah this would be great to spearhead a drink drive campaign.
I know it's not a laughing matter but i had to have a chuckle that the first person to comment on this works user name is...
freespirit!
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Re: FROM THE GRAVE
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 04:02:06 PM AEST
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WOW!! Very effectively done!! I agree with Johnny... This should be posted on every bar, liquor store, liquor bottle..you name it!!!
Well done..
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Re: FROM THE GRAVE
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by bethwood on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 04:43:59 PM AEST
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| again lynn you surpass yourself! as i said at work it would be a good narrative used on a drink drive ad, very well written! as usual!! by the way, have seen where you meant about the star ratings! dolly daydream still, only just worked it out!! seee you at work tomorow! xxxxx |
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Re: FROM THE GRAVE
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by jonquilcottage on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 05:34:25 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem and I think you are right it would make a fantastic advert on the telly I will have to read more of your poems . thanks jonquilcottage |
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Re: FROM THE GRAVE
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by Adelle on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 03:44:16 AM AEST
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| THAT IS REALLY GOOD- |
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