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Contributed by
amaya_h_k
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Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 02:33:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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My friends are exciting
With drama,
Problems,
And experiences of their own.
My friends are intelligent,
Book-known,
Well versed,
With lots of creativity.
My friends are funny,
With jokes,
Quirks,
Innuendos,
And limericks.
My friends are caring,
With love,
Support,
And quiet observation.
My friends are exciting
And intelligent
And funny
And caring
With tales to match my own,
And a ruthless wit best in combat,
Neverland and Fantasia would cease to exist
Without our Never Ending stories.
And all the while our fun
Outweighs the exciting, the wit.
Nothing is dangerous
Or humiliating
And never arrogant,
Because my friends are children at heart
Forever.
Copyright ©
amaya_h_k
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2006-03-20 14:33:21]
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Re: List Poem
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by AliB on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 03:21:32 PM AEST
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I really liked this. Good flow and choice of words. Did you do a creative writing course? If so, where and was it hard work? I'm thinking of doing one soon.
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 10:22:43 PM AEST
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Very nice. I like the thought of a Peter Pan collection of friends. Neverland is only as great as its inhabitants.
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Re: List Poem
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by snowflake on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:06:28 PM AEST
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Nice choice of words Great thoughts come to my mine while reading this Great Write!!!
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Re: List Poem
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by Lucy on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 11:58:42 PM AEST
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This is great, and true - everyone can relate to it! :)
Lucy
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