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Untitled
Contributed by
Jen54
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Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 11:17:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here I am
Another day
Sitting here
Wasting away
Losing site
Of whats to come
Wishing I
Was left to bleed
So in the end
I could be free
So lay me down
And in your dreams
See me cry
And here my screams
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2006-03-19 23:17:42]
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Re: Untitled
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by stew777 on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 05:27:56 AM AEST
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Sorry your feeling this low,
Heartfelt emotional write here
I hope things improveSoon.
God Bless You. |
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Re: Untitled
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by chaos78 on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:38:43 AM AEST
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| hope things get better ,i feel your pain |
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Re: Untitled
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by Tiffyo4 on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 05:34:33 PM AEST
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| man i love this you wrote this in the big house didn't you. your best work comes out when you really feel and believe what you are writing never stop you are a ture poet no matter what any one else says love ya much |
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Re: Untitled
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 09:15:08 PM AEST
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This is deep, feeling that way sucks. I can relate to this. A very great poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Untitled
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 09:24:55 PM AEST
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| Stop Feeling So Low |
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