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A brighter light has Shown
Contributed by
brew
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Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:20:20 PM in AEST
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The sadness that lies within those eyes
How could anyone take and break what you have hidden
Destroying
Taking the "whole"away, and never returning any back
You though....Could turn it all backwards, and reastart
Recarnate
Take the old...Toss it
If the old still remains, soul search the desicions
Just remember... It can all come together
Always a brighter light at the end of the Tunnel
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brew
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2006-03-19 17:20:20]
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Re: A brighter light has Shown
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:55:27 PM AEST
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good message
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Re: A brighter light has Shown
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 06:26:46 PM AEST
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Take the old...Toss it
What a great message for getting on with your life.
Great.great work.
J. |
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Re: A brighter light has Shown
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 06:32:01 PM AEST
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A wise peice of poetry well stated and nicely written.
Ben |
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Re: A brighter light has Shown
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by Chanti on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 07:50:49 PM AEST
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| Very uplifting :) |
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Re: A brighter light has Shown
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 09:56:42 PM AEST
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The past is passed and cannot be changed. Rarely even can it be rearranged on trying. Best to always go forward and look for the best in today and tomorrow. Great write.
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Re: A brighter light has Shown
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 06:09:57 AM AEST
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This is so true, my friend..... lovely write and message...
Hugs
Jenni
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Re: A brighter light has Shown
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:09:12 PM AEST
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Wonderful and wise words Dayna. Exceedingly
great advice. I loved it !
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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