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hoping
Contributed by
weeme
on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 03:40:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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hoping
I grad the blade and think for a sec
Will it be painful or will it be quick
I put a little pressure as I put it on my skin
My arm trembling as the blade goes in
+++++
Out comes a trickle a bright crimson red
I drag it further soon hoping to be dead
Soon ill go faint everything goes dark
Then ill see that bright little spark
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It is then that I no
When I light draws near
That ending my time
Will soon be here
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It is then that I feel
A pumping sensation
And soon see the light
A pin prick in the distance
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As I come round
My yes start to open
Was it due to fate?
Or was down to hoping?
Copyright ©
weeme
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2006-03-19 15:40:39]
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Re: hoping
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 11:29:45 PM AEST
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wow. i really liked your poem. i love how your words just seemed to flow together. i am so sry you feel this way. but i understand (in a sense) of how you feel. and i can only hope things will get better for you. things have gotten somewhat better for me. just plz try to keep holding on. ive made it this far. im sure you can do it too, i have faith in you, as long as you try.
good luck with everything.
peace, luv, n hugs.
jenny |
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Re: hoping
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by Nothingness on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 10:58:26 AM AEST
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| i liked your poem alot because i have been in that situation...i also wrote mine down but hose i didnt share i hope things arent to tough for you...hang in there |
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